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I will just wait right here,
fingers pressed against cold winter glass
sub-zero faith in your God
but uttering a prayer, just in case

It is like asking the mall Santa
to bring you something special Christmas morn
even though you know under red velvet fallacy,
lies a simple man, who might just suprise you
with a knock on your door
and a gift in hand

So
I will just wait right here
for you to come home
wrapped in a blue velvet suprise
to tell me
you missed me too

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blue velvet is a personal lil thing ........ :) he has a blue velvet blanket.....and Ill leave it at that
:iconbigmammajen:
someone I love.....just got sent to Iraq. I just want him to come home safe :(
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:iconoceanstorme:
That is a gorgeous picture! I love the B& W and the composition is wonderful!!! Glow works well also. :-) The poem is so sad, and yet hopeful, and goes together perfectly with the image. Excellent job!
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:iconrobonemesis:
Your :gallery: is truly impressive!
I just had to :+fav: this particular piece!
I think the poetry and picture complement each other extremely well.
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All the best Jen, keep up the good work!
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:iconivan-5252:
really romantic and sweet and loving.. u wouldnt be surprised if ppl think this situation here is the ideal relationship ppl should have.. and maybe even crave..

really nice :aww:
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~jussiblack Dec 6, 2003   Interface Designer
lovely... poet is :) and photo too!
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:iconpraxeum:
The photo + poem go together perfectly, very nice work.
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:icondarkotaku:
~darkotaku Nov 28, 2003  Student
Such emotion, both in the picture and the poem.... It sure is beautiful.

BTW, I can't believe I didn't comment on this sooner :omg:
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:iconddraid:
a very moving piece. i hope he comes home ok
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:iconbroken-glass:
I hope your friend returns saftely.
:)
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:iconnoirin:
ye should explain the blue velvet :)

but it's cute, i like it
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:iconbigmammajen:
its a blanket he had, that always kept slipping off the bed. :)
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